Grammar Glory

The goal is to find and correct my grammar mistakes. The first person to notify me with the correct correction will get a Grammar Point (GP). Entries by Past Justin (pen and paper journal entries) are not viable sources of grammar points. He was abhorrently miserable at grammar, and there's just too many points stored up in his content. 

The Grammar Hammer- Sandy Hicks (2)
2nd- Dale Hicks (1)